You and Andy are obviously doing nothing but play guitar over there. I loved the guitar work at the end of the tune, reminded me more of Pink Floyd's David Gilmour than the Stones, there was a cool darkness to it. I agree with Jeffster that the vocals could be mixed louder. Some compression on the vocals and less reverb would help too. I'd use very little reverb on the guitars, or record them totally dry, some of your guitar work is getting lost in the wash of reverb. Better to add this on the computer; with a good reverb on the PC you can set a pre-delay so the reverb doesn't kick in till a little after the attack. If none of that made any sense it's because I haven't hit the coffee yet this morning.
For a second attempt it's already sounding great. Looking forward to your 3rd, 4th, 5th, etc.